Hurt Me, I Will Forgive

Hurt me some more, if thats what you need
how well you hide who you are
have you always worn that mask?
you took from me while smiling
you stole my heart, with promises
you steal my child ,with your freedom
its all you really wanted...
you want something to hurt...
to punish for your abuse.. but a child?
and your hurt, you poor, poor, girl
somebody, give her a place to stay..
who took your innocence?
why make me pay?
do you not forgive?
i only see your potential
if i saw you, i wouldnt love you
an angry, lier and thief
dont tell me the truth, or yourself
it will only hurt you
and free me from your curse
you need me to suffer to make you happy
all vampires need blood
why do i love the wounded?
sink your teeth into my heart, 
enjoy the blood, and my suffering
I have cried more than this
i will forgive, i will forgive, i will forgive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/11/2010 7:19:00 AM
i meant to put a period not a 1 sorry, i hate typo's
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:18:00 AM
this is a great poem, i like a poem that gets my emotions going if it is sadness or anger or whatever, isn't it amazing to feel that you have the power, through words alone, to influence someone's emotions, day, or even life! good write and honest emotion, noone likes to be used or torn apart. this was a great write1
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Date: 12/25/2009 6:36:00 AM
a forgiveness can be limited to few times if there nothing changes then a new friends and environment what we need :) .....
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Date: 12/25/2009 6:02:00 AM
Forgiveness is not easy but it is for the person that has been hurt and not the one who hurt the person unless that person is really needing to feel forgiven by the one that they know they hurt. Sara
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