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Hurt Me

Tear me to pieces, parade on the path naked, mutilate me Rusticate my life! Ruthless radical rebel, ravish me! Mock my mortal flesh, jab me jovially, ceaselessly, till sweet sympathy sprouts in your hard heart, hurt me! Horrible pain pulsating; somehow I stand, grip- only hope; My bones in fragments, never shall be joined Identity crushed, individuality mashed up, rip me off this earth! Seize my air too; snatch it, its all left in me. Who am I to revolt? The world’s your abode too, Exist and I happily extinct, you survive in serene stillness. Breathe the air I breathed of forgiveness and love, who knows It might by some means change you to a human being.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/22/2011 10:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Bruce. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:36:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/19/2011 1:13:00 AM
wow this is a wonderful deep piece,.., thanks for sharing. Have yourself a great one,.. always ~p.d.
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Bruce Chhetri
Date: 8/19/2011 3:37:00 AM
Thanks..its an encouragement for me

Book: Shattered Sighs