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I feel Conflicted Confused Torn You'd "Never hurt me" You swore I didn't think I'd feel this way Even now I think of words to say To describe This odd pain I'd liked you That much is true But it stopped there So its not fair For me to feel like this So mixed You moved on faster than I thought It hurts to know how soon you gave up I pretend And say, "Let's be friends." But was it all a lie? The feelings you conjured up inside For me? The distant way you brush me aside As cool as ice I meant nothing to you Did I? It's just the same I'm like a pawn in a chess game No You'd never hurt me You're too blind to see That you did Constantly "I'd never hurt you." It's a line that's been reused And I was a fool For falling for that one too Don't say it, "I'd never hurt you." It's cruel Because in the end You always do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/12/2013 3:37:00 PM
Caleah, love is blind, I adore the deep emotions in this poem. I marked my x-es words when he told me he was never gonna hurt me.. but at the end that's all I got.. hurt hurt & hurt... a very powerful poem my newest favorite poet. Thank you for the lovely comments. I try very hard to post poems poets might like... always~ LINDA
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/13/2013 8:50:00 AM
Oh I know, (not to be a guy hater cause I'm not) but most guys can be such jerks. Sadly I have experienced this firsthand way too many times. I am so sorry that you had to as well. It always hurts when the person you care for doesn't mean what they say... Thank you so much!!! That means so much to me! U have wonderful poetry as well! Keep on writing!
Date: 5/10/2013 5:49:00 PM
very heartfelt write here.keep up the great work.take care.
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 12:55:00 PM
Thanks so much! :D
Date: 3/25/2013 1:41:00 PM
pretty nice and you are right im a lover with a strong heart thank you.
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Date: 2/18/2013 6:37:00 PM
loved yur poem :))))
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Caleah Buil
Date: 3/29/2013 12:11:00 PM
Thanks so much for commenting! :D
Date: 2/17/2013 10:31:00 AM
with beautiful poetry like this,, you will not be hurting too long Caleah..love this poem..
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Caleah Buil
Date: 2/17/2013 12:41:00 PM
Aww! Thank you so much! That really means a lot. :)
Date: 2/13/2013 11:37:00 AM
The day you meet the "right", then you will understand that he is your "prince" - Touching written Caleah. - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Caleah Buil
Date: 2/15/2013 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much! Really encouraging words. I do believe that one day I will. :) Have a wonderful day as well!
Date: 2/12/2013 10:26:00 PM
Yes, some people just can't even see what they are doing. they are blind to it. Actions speak louder than words. That is one proverb I strongly believe in and your poem says that words mean very little as well!
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