Hurt

Its nostalgia that killing me from inside 
      its worst I know
Never I ever felt such ,
         Its making pain and it grow.....


The path is as clear as mud
and I can’t even shed tears to make it flow 


The time is moving, The next sun is to glow
My eyes wait to see
but mind refused though.....


Soul is charming, its laughing ,its quite busy in dreams the real self feel empty 
and it even can’t scream……


Its constant ,its flowing,
its toughness that surround
The stones i know better
   Then the living beings around


The feelings are  light as light as straw
but where to fly how come they know



Sometimes it hurts it hurts deeply I know
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Agustin Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 22, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Sang, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 31, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Sang, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Sang. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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February 11, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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