Faizah Spence Poet I do not know?

Hurry Up Day

Hurry up Day
I wish you would just go away

You always give me so many things to do
You never give me rest and that’s why I can’t wait to be through with you

You move so slowly and your much too long
The longer you drag, the more things go wrong

You wake me up when I want to sleep
Every time I’m around you, you send me home tired and weak

You’re selfish and you only want to have your way
You run me around so much; you never give me time to play

Sometimes people ask me, where has the day gone?
I tell them I don’t care, because I’ve been with Day much too long

So, Hurry up Day, I wish you would just go away
Because my true love Night is coming and this time I’m begging him to stay

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Robert A. Dufresne May 23, 2011 at 7:17 PM very well done. The personification is a surprise ending. good one, Faizah.

Gwendolen Song May 23, 2011 at 5:47 PM Hi Faizah- This is neat....you WANT the night...clever concept here...as I work night shift I often say...hurry up night, I want it to be day!! ha ha. Less stress for you at night and it's just a romantic kind of hour I suppose. (on the line..much too long) if u meant it to be then it's a typo. I envy those who speak and write multiple languages...I should improve myself more and expand my mind. Hats off to you. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2011 at 5:37 PM Creative and inspirations expressions, Faizah

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 4:11 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Faizah. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol