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Hurry Darling

Writing you a love letter Making up a song Missing you so very much Darling don't be long Thinking of your shining eyes Your crazy little grin When you breathe into my ear The way I feel's a sin! You reach for me again And I lose all my will Wrapped up in your arms Gives me a fine chill I'm writing to you darling So hurry don't be late Take the road less traveled Cos I can hardly wait!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 9:15:00 AM
love it till death to us part
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:16:00 PM
adorable, love it
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Date: 9/13/2010 7:02:00 PM
aww, I practically sung this... sweet sentiment, simple rhyme and structure and the meter was consistent. A solid write!
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:37:00 PM
I love the feeling of hope and joy you convey so well in this poem, Deb. It inspires those of us who have played the game of love and lost. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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