Hurrican Michael the Aftermath

the jealous field hand
supplanting the cotton farm
deposits debris

10/11/2018

weatherhaiku

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Kim Rodrigues

October 16, 2018 at 5:26 PM

Thanks!

Jean Bush

October 16, 2018 at 10:48 AM

Well penned. Sounds like you had a close call. Praying for everyone.

Heidi Sands

October 11, 2018 at 5:27 PM

Very nicely written Kim. It is so hard to see when this weather takes so much away.

Kim Rodrigues

October 12, 2018 at 9:08 PM

So sad...

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 11, 2018 at 2:09 PM

- Very well done, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

October 11, 2018 at 3:07 PM

Thanks, my sunshine-smiley friend!

Tom Cunningham

October 11, 2018 at 2:06 PM

Well written Kim, so sad to see the damage it's caused, for some it will take years to recover. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues

October 11, 2018 at 3:06 PM

Can’t even imagine!

Carolyn Devonshire

October 11, 2018 at 1:43 PM

Creative metaphor, Kim, and aptly applied. My former neighbors in Tallahassee cannot be reached by phone right now, but they were prepared to wait out the storm at home with a generator. Such a sad event! Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues

October 11, 2018 at 3:06 PM

I hope you hear from them soon!