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Michael, the farmer, may be facing bankruptcy. Praying for him.

Hurrican Michael the Aftermath

the jealous field hand
supplanting the cotton farm
deposits debris

10/11/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 10/16/2018 5:26:00 PM
Thanks!
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Date: 10/16/2018 10:48:00 AM
Well penned. Sounds like you had a close call. Praying for everyone.
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Date: 10/11/2018 5:27:00 PM
Very nicely written Kim. It is so hard to see when this weather takes so much away.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2018 9:08:00 PM
So sad...
Date: 10/11/2018 2:09:00 PM
- Very well done, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thanks, my sunshine-smiley friend!
Date: 10/11/2018 2:06:00 PM
Well written Kim, so sad to see the damage it's caused, for some it will take years to recover. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 3:06:00 PM
Can’t even imagine!
Date: 10/11/2018 1:43:00 PM
Creative metaphor, Kim, and aptly applied. My former neighbors in Tallahassee cannot be reached by phone right now, but they were prepared to wait out the storm at home with a generator. Such a sad event! Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 3:06:00 PM
I hope you hear from them soon!
Date: 10/11/2018 1:38:00 PM
I saw the photos of the devastation this morning and it is heart breaking. So many have lost so much. Nicely expressed thoughts Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Chris...hugs, Kim
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