Hunting

ex-soldier
aims at deer
clicks shutter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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September 26, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Dear Norman, your haiku imagery is dramatic and dynamic. Your last line is skillfully turned for a wonderfully unexpected “aha!” moment. Awesome haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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