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Hunker Down

Subtle, very subtle, yet the promise whispers in the trees. The zinnias struggle with a push one last bud to sky unfurl, While the neighbor's cat goes on the prowl for one more kill to squeeze. Late September days will end and the unprepared imperil. The strident cries heard in the sky are the sounds of birds going south. Though crammed and touching wings at times, they fly with great effusion. A squirrel hordes some nuts he's found by stuffing them in his mouth, While looking for a ready den, the mice run in confusion. The slowly, shortening days are the sun's bowing to appease The tired flora/fauna pact that's desperate for a long rest, But a softened whisper in the wind has changed to a cold breeze, And ice and snow begin to form on the tallest mountain crest.

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Date: 10/14/2023 11:55:00 PM
I love those final two lines Hilda - all the happenings on the ground suggestive of winter being on its way but high up it's already arrived and is on the prowl - lovely imagery, I enjoyed this one
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/15/2023 1:50:00 PM
Thank you. Each season has its own song.
Date: 10/14/2023 3:39:00 PM
Great imagery of the changing season. Enjoyed reading.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/14/2023 4:09:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/14/2023 3:35:00 PM
Great imagery of the changing season. Enjoyed reading.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/14/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you. I'm glad it was enjoyable.
Date: 10/14/2023 4:22:00 AM
You've so beautifully pictured the transition from autumn to winter. I love so many of your lines and your imagery. I especially like the line, 'zinnias struggled.' That's what our zinnias are doing. And the slowly shortening days are subtly reminding us to do as you said, 'hunker down.' A lovely poem that I'm faving.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/14/2023 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much. I value your comments.

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