Hungry Eyes

The haggard bent on her aged staff
Wobbling and tumbling
Along the withered ballast
Two black long rods ironed leading
To her village dear lost long  ago.
Hunger for her home of wombed breaths
Praying the jealous daylight not to set
The search continues in feverish light
Destination slow on uncarpeted roads
The country so bedraggled her eyes squinted.
Her birds do fly home soon tonight
Quilts to be aired to warm them tight
Time to burn the stove, broth to be cooked
But where is her hearth she cries in anguish
Her soul's obsession grew with ever hungry eyes
My hearth, my children! My hearth, my children!


FIRST
Balveen Cheema
August 20, 2015
Contest: Waiting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:04 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your win. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 2:39 AM
Very expressive write Balveen! Congrats on a much deserved first place win!
Cheema Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Upma! You pen beautifully!
Y. Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Balveen, congratulations on your 1st place well deserved win:-) Alexis
Cheema Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Thanks Alexis! Take care, Balveen
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 12:31 PM
such a vivid descriptive write Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 12:35 PM
Thank you so very much Jan! Love
Pair Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Beautiful.
Cheema Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Thanks for appreciating and stopping by!
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