Hungry Duck

Ducks dive upside down
Searching olive green shallows
For grubs escaping

Entered: 1/1/2021
Comp: Hi-Ku (5)
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bangalee Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:25 PM
Beautiful imagery created in short
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 11:14 AM
A cute/fun write. I was going to Soup mail you but I could not find any. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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May 10, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Some of us just dabble, others dive right in! Enjoyed :))) xomo
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