hungry deer

deer take over fields 
gobbling up farmers scraps 
then fade into woods
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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April 15, 2025 at 5:14 PM
A petite story with impact, I love the vivid imagery and how the last line blurs the visual from the deer to the trees.
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November 14, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Sadly in the UK their habitat is being destroyed, to make way for new homes to be built.
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November 14, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Same here in Ohio!
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