Arden Gopela Poet Diamante

Hunger To Fullness

Famine
                        Feverish, desperate
            Suffering, threatening, punishing
             Surplus,excess,abundance,glut
              Gratifying,pleasing,nourishing
                             Satisfied, full
                                  Satiety

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Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2013 at 7:49 PM Arden, congratulations on your Diamente ...xox..PD

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 16, 2013 at 2:33 PM Arden, sounds like you are set for Thanksgiving, wonderful transition, congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2013 at 2:26 PM Great two opposites chosen..Enjoyed reading this one..Way to go..Sara

Juliet Ligon November 15, 2013 at 2:26 PM Interesting to consider this world is full of both extremes. Congrats, Arden!

Nette Onclaud November 15, 2013 at 3:13 AM wonderful change of thought, arden... mabuhay ang noypi... go!..sweet cheers to you, kababayan..:) huggs:)

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2013 at 11:34 PM great items to contrast! congrats on your well deserved win.

Sandra Adams November 14, 2013 at 7:38 PM Arden you did a great job with this form...congrats on your fine win :)

Carrie Richards November 14, 2013 at 2:35 PM Wow.....this was wonderful, Arden......the transition was perfectly executed and so fluent! Congratulations on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 14, 2013 at 4:57 AM Congratulations on your win Arden xx

Christopher Thor Britt November 13, 2013 at 10:14 PM Arden...Grats on your fine win. CTB

Dr.Ram Mehta November 13, 2013 at 10:02 PM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Arden

Charmaine Chircop November 13, 2013 at 3:09 PM This diamante is very powerful and touching to the core.I just realized you are from philippines from our carrie s blog.Hope all will get better ..You re in my prayers with my other friends now ..Charma

Robin Davis November 9, 2013 at 9:02 AM It's sad when families don't have enough to eat every day. We should all help each other and provide for one another. Isn't that what being human is about Nice job Arden Gopela November 9, 2013 at 9:15 AM Well-said, Robin! Its heartbreaking to see someone begging for food especially here in the country. Helping is one way of changing an old course to a new - glad society. Take care my friend! Love,love,love! :-)

Arden Gopela November 8, 2013 at 5:05 AM If only things aren't ironic, life would be fair to everyone. But that's how it goes, we just have to live and push to survive. Love,love,love! :-) - Den