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Hunger

Cold and silent night as he climbs over the wire his belly grumbles. Olusegun Arowolo Contest:GET YOUR SENRYU ON by Judy Konos

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 5:05:00 PM

Olusegun, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/13/2015 10:30:00 AM

a painful reality for many. Congrats for fine win. Mohan

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2015 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Olusegun! I can imagine someone climbing over to pinch something to fill an empty stomach! // paul

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/12/2015 9:01:00 AM

Congrats on your win Olusegun. A beautiful write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 9:59:00 PM

A sad one. I imagine someone during war time!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/11/2015 7:38:00 PM

an evocative senryu! Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love

Judy Konos

Date: 4/11/2015 9:51:00 AM

This is most imaginative poetry. I could picture all kinds of things...a lone man escaping from prison walls....Hey! Thanks for being in my contest...You are a super poet!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2015 9:49:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats :-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2015 12:22:00 PM

great senryu:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx