Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

Humpty Dumpty Was So Lucky

three little pigs went up the hill,
to meet little red riding hood,
big bad wolf has eaten his fill,
the man was still chopping the wood!
all sat at table together,
with Alice, Beast and pretty Belle,
at helm was fairy godmother,
that’s when poor Humpty Dumpty fell!
Jack and Jill rushed in to rescue,
Jack Frost came along in a breeze
postman Pat and fireman Sam too,
the Cheshire cat smiled! such a tease!
Aladdin flew him to hospital,
he was fixed back by Dr.Who!
Isn’t it lucky Humpty fell,
when there was the full Disney crew!

1st placement
Written 20/03/2021
All yours March(22) contest
Brian Strand sponsor
8 syllables each line

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Eve Roper April 5, 2021 at 11:53 AM This is so cute, Krish, l love it . Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Hugs Krish Radhakrishna April 5, 2021 at 11:56 AM Thanks Eve. This was inspired by your contest. If you bring out a nursery rhyme book, I would submit this for your consideration!:)

L Milton Hankins March 20, 2021 at 8:57 AM So clever; so much fun. I enjoyed your little foray into Disney world, Krish. Nice work. Krish Radhakrishna March 20, 2021 at 9:10 AM Thanks Milton! Probably inspired by my ensuing second childhood!!:)