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Humpty Dumpty

Eggs
Scrambled
Fried on toast
Sunny side up
Shell

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Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2015 at 2:15 PM

I really like this. Once I did a limerick on old humpty dumpty!!

Shane Cooper

February 4, 2015 at 2:20 PM

Hi, It was fun to write it really suited the form. I envy you all being able to write limerick's. I just cannot get the meter right. I wrote a string of 5 the other day and all just failed on the last line. thanks for dropping by Andrea. Love Shane xxx

Michelle Mac Donald

January 10, 2015 at 5:47 PM

Would be more than enough for all the king's horses and all the king's men, for sure. Especially since the horses would discreetly walk away. Nicely done, Shane! I'd like him poached, without the shell! I will read more of your treasures, Shane. So happy you are on the Soup! Mikki

Shane Cooper

January 10, 2015 at 5:58 PM

Thank you mikki, I am trying to do the same with mr walrus hopefully have something for tomorrow Love Shanexxx