Hummingbirds

Spinning ruby jewels wielding calvary swords
wage battle with scarlet trumpet flowers...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 11:46 AM
too cool!!!! Valerie! jmg
Winter Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 10:11 AM
Hummingbirds are extremely special to me. Let me say, maybe 'otherworldly' in a sense. These two lines are like poetry in motion. A beautiful moving picture you have painted! (and thank you for all those lovely comments!) Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Such a clever description this makes, can see those flutterings hovering around the trumpet vine! ~ Nicely done, Valerie!~ Love, Carrie
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