Hummingbird Motion

whisperings of wings
deep drone of summer's old gold
red rose drips petals

only time will tell
of the countless jeweled birds
summoned by the blooms

fanning the breezes
'til the last of orange sun
august night is soon

beautybirdflowerflyingimageryhaiku

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Timothy Ray

June 9, 2022 at 4:26 PM

nice, loved this walk, and makes me sad they will not let me hang them, feeders in these apts....so right outside my desk window i watch my avain friends feed all day on the ground....great poem

Evelyn Judy Buehler

June 9, 2022 at 5:56 PM

Thank you for your positive remarks, which brighten my day. I love to watch the birds, too. Hope your evening is a nice one. :)

Alexis Y.

May 20, 2022 at 5:59 AM

WoW! Evelyn, Like always, you painted such a lovely scene with words. Each stanza made the overall picture/scene come to life. Hummingbirds are such fascinating creatures. Excellent job. Have a nice day;-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 20, 2022 at 9:44 AM

Thank you so much for your touching comments, Alexis. They bring sunshine to this overcast day. Have a blessed weekend, Evelyn :)

Sally Eslinger

May 20, 2022 at 4:55 AM

I made great effort this morning to find this, your latest creation, to beging my day…and you blessed my hunt with this compelling poem/painting about nature’s flying jewels. Nature’s spectacular creation flies herein as yours! Bravo! xoxo now I am thus blessed & may enjoy my morning coffee. Thank you much!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 20, 2022 at 9:47 AM

You are most welcome. Your words bring such smiles, dear Sally. Thank you for your kind expressions. :)