Hummingbird Drinks

hummingbird drinks from
orange canna lily bloom...
jack decapitates  


jack=Jack Frost, Hoar's Frost, etc.

naturehaiku

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Debbie Duncan

September 29, 2012 at 4:08 PM

great write Sara,,,, you have a blessed weekend ;}

Leo Larry Amadore

September 21, 2012 at 9:34 AM

Nicely painted scene...enjoyed your haiku!

Kash Poet

September 21, 2012 at 7:53 AM

Love this Sara!Beautiful haiku.

Russell Sivey

September 21, 2012 at 6:57 AM

Yes, the Jack Frost sure can do a number to all of nature! Have you had a frost yet? I bet in Atlanta you probably haven't, but we have had one here already! And it sure was cold that morning, and it still got up to 70 degrees the next day! A 34 degree shift, wow, quite a wide range of temperatures, but I've seen a lot more than that though! Well your write is truly phenomenal my friend! I love this incredible write, a fabulous piece, Great Work!!