Hummingbird Drinks

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hummingbird drinks from orange canna lily bloom... jack decapitates jack=Jack Frost, Hoar's Frost, etc.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/29/2012 4:08:00 PM

great write Sara,,,, you have a blessed weekend ;}

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 9/21/2012 9:34:00 AM

Nicely painted scene...enjoyed your haiku!

Kash Poet

Date: 9/21/2012 7:53:00 AM

Love this Sara!Beautiful haiku.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/21/2012 6:57:00 AM

Yes, the Jack Frost sure can do a number to all of nature! Have you had a frost yet? I bet in Atlanta you probably haven't, but we have had one here already! And it sure was cold that morning, and it still got up to 70 degrees the next day! A 34 degree shift, wow, quite a wide range of temperatures, but I've seen a lot more than that though! Well your write is truly phenomenal my friend! I love this incredible write, a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/21/2012 5:50:00 AM

Oooooooh, this is lovely Sara. An excellent haiku!