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Hummingbird

hummingbird's green 
 array seen in willow tree... 
no, three leaves windblow

I am seeing things this morn!!Ha!!

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K K Iloduba Jnr

May 22, 2013 at 3:16 PM

there are few who churn out Haiku the way you do!

Michael Ainsley

April 30, 2013 at 11:13 PM

Vary nice Sara! I love how you bring nature to life .

Kash Poet

April 27, 2013 at 12:08 PM

Beautiful haiku here Sara!Lovely read.

Watisungla Ao

April 27, 2013 at 5:38 AM

Some moments are so capturing (hardly matters their real presence) that when you pen it down,it just become more beautifull to recollect those moments.

Lucilla Carrillo

April 26, 2013 at 9:20 PM

Nice poem and the morning is the best way to see beautiful things. Good night and God bless you..... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2013 at 5:51 PM

oh my, how creative this is!!! and I wish you were right about working at the gym. but I would have to double my trips to even lose a pound. haha

Russell Sivey

April 26, 2013 at 3:45 PM

Ha ha, oh I too have days in which I see illusions so don't feel bad Sara! Did you notice my "On the Porch" poem? I wrote that by your inspiring me to do so! I believe it turned out pretty good if you ask me! I hope that you enjoy it! This poem is wonderful my friend! I enjoyed reading it today, Awesome Work!!