Terry Shuff Poet Haiku

Hummingbird

humming bird                                                                                                                                

                                 from behind plant                                                            
                      
                                    eyes meet




              This is Original Basho form, phonemes rather than syllables in American form. Also, no capitals or punctuation. Must be read or recited in one breath. Also an actual occurrence.

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Silent One November 27, 2020 at 6:44 AM Perfect haiku, how it should be Terry Shuff December 19, 2020 at 10:04 AM Thank you silent one. Original Basho form is the only form that captures the moment of an actual event that expresses immediate recognition and the uniqueness of the moment.

Caren Krutsinger November 26, 2020 at 4:54 PM These vital moments connect us. Terry Shuff November 26, 2020 at 6:24 PM Yes Caren, I agree with your insightful belief. The great Basho taught his followers to see and express the moments that most people haven't { for whatever reason} yet become aware of these snapshots of life in such an brief glimpse of time and occurrence. When we see it, it's complete. No need to see more, or add to it in our thoughts. We may never see it happen again, and therefore we will always remember it. When we think of it, It's as fresh as the first time.