Hummingbird

floating colorful
hummingbird iridescent
don't blink for he's gone


Contest 8/17/18
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Gentry Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Good haiku. They are so fsst.
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Lovely, how can you go wrong describing a darling little hummingbird! Well done, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Thanks love them too!
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Great one. They are so fast :)
Mcguire Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Thank you Heidi!
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