Hummingbird

The hummingbird sings,
among the coloured blossoms:
seeking sweet nectar

August 16, 2018
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Allison Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 2:48 PM
lovely haiku Kaveesha, having read the comments from Virginia,have you considered writing sweet nectar in the final line:-)hugs Jan xx
Ruwindi Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Yes Jan, I should do it. thank you for your advice, and also the visit. :)
Waters Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 8:58 PM
cool
Waters Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 8:55 PM
nice except for all the 'the's',which have no place in this concentrated form. take the place of vital information
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