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Hummingbird

The hummingbird sings, among the coloured blossoms: seeking sweet nectar August 16, 2018

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Date: 12/20/2018 2:48:00 PM
lovely haiku Kaveesha, having read the comments from Virginia,have you considered writing sweet nectar in the final line:-)hugs Jan xx
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Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 12/20/2018 8:02:00 PM
Yes Jan, I should do it. thank you for your advice, and also the visit. :)
Date: 8/20/2018 8:58:00 PM
cool
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Date: 8/20/2018 8:55:00 PM
nice except for all the 'the's',which have no place in this concentrated form. take the place of vital information
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