Hummingbird

peaceful flower bed
humming movement melody
sip, sip! then she's gone

8.16.18

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Sandra Haight

Date: 8/22/2018 8:10:00 PM

The perfect imagery in your lovely Haiku, Jesse! Congratulation on your placement on this short list of winners! Sandra

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/21/2018 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Very nice haiku! They are fast. :)

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/19/2018 1:55:00 AM

congrats on your winner..A sip in time.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/18/2018 10:38:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win, Jesse.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2018 10:27:00 AM

yayyy! You got a win. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/18/2018 10:12:00 AM

Sweet slip of a wonderful little poem.......sip sip...!! Congratulations !! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 8/18/2018 8:44:00 AM

I can see it :) lovely haiku, congratulations on your win! xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2018 5:28:00 AM

Nicely done, they are a beautiful sight and gone in a flash, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2018 6:58:00 PM

and they vanish SO fast. You captured that well.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/17/2018 10:51:00 PM

Thank you. I've seen them only a couple times in my yard and yes, they disappear almost as if by magic.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/16/2018 3:31:00 PM

Love your haiku :)

Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/17/2018 8:34:00 AM

Thank you.

Hummingbird

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