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Humming Birds Flutter

Humming birds
Flutter through the wind
never falling from the sky.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2017 at 5:24 AM

- This website is a good tool: How many syllables: www.howmanysyllables.com - A friendly recommendation, Heather :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2017 at 6:19 AM

- Most common in a Haiku: 5/7/5 syllable :) hugs form Norway :)

Heather Brearley

March 4, 2017 at 5:50 AM

Ps: Thank you for the tip :)

Heather Brearley

March 4, 2017 at 5:49 AM

Thank you for the tip. I thought it was 3 top line 5 middle line. 7 lower line? Am I wrong? I googled it. But I could be mistaken. I am really winging it starting new with all the different forms of poetry.

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