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Humming Bird Wings

In a moment of a second Lingers the sweet smell of nectar Observers cannot see the scent Various particles are too small Everything microscopic to our eyes Young hummingbird wings;blur of color Over a flower, no thorns to demise Use your quickness, survive all things only wish to hit pause see humming bird wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/24/2011 10:38:00 AM
The moment describes it, how the hummingbird darts in from nowhere, suspended, then gone. Love it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/23/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Jessica. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jesicca
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Date: 6/30/2009 10:06:00 AM
Awesome poem Jessica. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:06:00 PM
I LIKE THIS POEM THIS I'M NEW TO THE POETRY SOUP WORLD SO I WAS JUST LOOKING AROUND AND READING POEMS AND IF YOU CAN PLEASE READ SOME OF MY POEMS AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK PLEASE AND THANK YOU
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