Hummer

Hummer
perches 'pon pear
Scratches looks all around
Cat spies tiny feathered treat
Too small

naturecinquain

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Debbie Duncan

June 10, 2013 at 1:49 PM

Love hummingbirds,,,, nicely done,,, thank you for liking my Beauty of Poetry, I'm not really sure I like it ;}

Bl Devnath

May 27, 2013 at 12:02 PM

Nice job done here. Loved always, bl

Manel Gunatillake

May 27, 2013 at 11:01 AM

I sit hours looking at them how they suck nectar. cats can hardly get a chance. Nice poem.

Poet Destroyer A

May 26, 2013 at 8:27 PM

awe, Sara,,,, hope the cat doesn't' get the treat... enjoyed~ Linda

Robert Johnson

May 26, 2013 at 3:24 PM

The cat better be careful, those whiskers would get hacked right off by those wings.

Russell Sivey

May 26, 2013 at 1:38 PM

This is a spectacular write my friend! I am enthralled by the magnificence of this enormously wonderful poem this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!