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HUMILITY FOUND

HUMILITY FOUND ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When ego's fragile form begins to fade, a limitless expanse of soul appears. The boundaries that once bound and confined, now stretch, expand, transform, and astound. In losing the ego self, another universe is found, a world of wonder, limitless, and esoteric. The chains of comparison are severed; they no longer bind, no longer suffocate either you or me. The prison of competition is left behind, unfettered, enlightenment grows. In this vast and open place, humility also grows, and a web of love and Divine interconnectedness prevail.
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Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Truth in every single word, Sara. Bravo! ~ Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 3:13 AM
I really like this one with its depth of understanding. Thanks for sharing it with us. If it is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 6:31 PM
well penned, Sara ~
Hind Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 4:00 PM
So small we are to connect in such a large way - beautiful and peaceable <3 :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 5:32 PM
thanks for your insightful comments, Paige. Wishing you a splendid weekend, hugs, Sara
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