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Humidity

thunder clouds peak

     and lightning zigzags - 
     
     perspiration trickles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:34 AM
I had those days in my childhood when I lived in Iowa. Yes, this describes it. By the way, you ought to enter your moon haiku in the red moon contest. You could just change it to red and it would fit!
Harrell Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:17 AM
:) funny!
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