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Humble Moon

Behold the night sky
Humble moon and distant stars
A canvas of dreams

dreammoonnightstarshaiku

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Robert Warlov

September 29, 2024 at 7:04 AM

The most clear, simple and direct language ~ the extraordinary power of haiku! The indominable human spirit reflected in the grandeur of the night sky. Inspiration's breath shared! I'll keep your secret ;)

Andrea Dietrich

May 3, 2024 at 4:28 PM

This is one awesome KU!

Sara Kendrick

February 22, 2024 at 5:25 AM

Ahhh!! I like this one. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Robert Schatz

February 22, 2024 at 5:44 PM

Thank you so much Sara!

Paula Goldsmith

December 9, 2023 at 12:03 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Humble Moon" write. Wish you would write more... Have a wonderful day.............

Robert Schatz

December 9, 2023 at 3:27 PM

Wow Paula! Such lovely comments! Thank so much!

Christina Bowring

November 7, 2023 at 2:30 PM

A beautiful Haiku Robert. Love your artistic choice of words to create enchanting imagery. I love the night sky - full of inspiration. Really enjoyed it and good to see you posting. Keep on writing and interacting … :):)

Robert Schatz

October 30, 2023 at 3:29 PM

Thank you Ink Express!

Ink Empress

October 29, 2023 at 11:48 PM

Canvas of dreams, I absolutely love that and also how you’ve written this so very ethereal haiku. I often get excited seeing the moon and stars, simple things of nature can inspire so many and get us to dream away! Absolute pleasure reading this

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