Humble Moon

Behold the night sky Humble moon and distant stars A canvas of dreams

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Robert Warlov

Date: 9/29/2024 7:04:00 AM

The most clear, simple and direct language ~ the extraordinary power of haiku! The indominable human spirit reflected in the grandeur of the night sky. Inspiration's breath shared! I'll keep your secret ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2024 4:28:00 PM

This is one awesome KU!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2024 5:25:00 AM

Ahhh!! I like this one. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Robert Schatz
Date: 2/22/2024 5:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/9/2023 12:03:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Humble Moon" write. Wish you would write more... Have a wonderful day.............

Robert Schatz
Date: 12/9/2023 3:27:00 PM

Wow Paula! Such lovely comments! Thank so much!

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/7/2023 2:30:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku Robert. Love your artistic choice of words to create enchanting imagery. I love the night sky - full of inspiration. Really enjoyed it and good to see you posting. Keep on writing and interacting … :):)

Robert Schatz

Date: 10/30/2023 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Ink Express!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/29/2023 11:48:00 PM

Canvas of dreams, I absolutely love that and also how you’ve written this so very ethereal haiku. I often get excited seeing the moon and stars, simple things of nature can inspire so many and get us to dream away! Absolute pleasure reading this