Humans I Visited

"I knocked, they opened
 I stayed

Humans I visited
were weak, oblivious 
and stupid to notice the obvious

I ran through their arteries, veins
and brains
I captured and destroyed their defense

I dominated after half of
All I Destroyed Surrendered"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Capitano Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Very interesting Romeo perhaps a bit too cryptic.
Moses Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 2:47 AM
this poem represent a dialogue between the virus and the people... Humans i visited represent the virus HIV
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