..Humanity Beached

Powerful piece you have penned here. Poignant in so few words. Thanks so much for sharing! Have a Blessed Day~Mary

Sounds real healthy! LOL- Good senryu, enjoyed.

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Deb. Love, Carol

Nice imagery here...I think I would have said "fish and chics with oil". However, this is one of those poems that makes you think, which is exactly what you made me do. Congrats, Deb, on your well deserved win! Dan C

Sounds like the terrible wreck in the Gulf, good write..thanks on Stick..Danny

hey, Deb, congratulations , and guess what? I am able to do this fast now(see the wiinners). WHOO HEEEEEE

way to go!!! Deb! this is a very cool senryu with acrobatic twists, turns, and tumbles! I expect such work from you! an amazing poet...and, also, thanks for the honorable mention in your contest, I was thrilled to be among such talented poets here!!! much love.... your humble and loyal friend forever, jamie

Congrats Debbie on your success in my contest.. a wonderful write and thankxxx for your support also.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

lol, a classic seaside image, reminds me of those cartoon postcards. Very good summer senryu, best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)

Yummy I love fish and chips! Good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~

oh ya been burnt one to many times only thing that spared me was noxzemia cooled right down then peeled like fish hey got my phrase done my poem is called HEY VERN lol

yum, sounds delicious because it is(: have yourself a great summer, Deborah.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Hello, this is Sierra. I am the writer of Until We Meet Again. I have withdrawn from your contest and I apologize for the misunderstanding. I am new to the community and still learning how to operate everything on the site. But I would like to enter your contest and be given a catch phrase if that is possible. Thank you

Nice title, Apt images conveying the message of the current Oil problem, yet humor in the last line.

there is a fish shack on the shore of a lake I walk around, incredible calamari , scallops and shrimp, (consumed in correct portions, my Daughter preaches to me!) fun poem! Deb! gemini jim

COOL in a hot way!! ME LOVES fish and chips AND summer. LUv, Andrea