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1/10/2025 for Laws of Physics and Humanity Poetry Contest sponsored by Di11y Da11y

Humanity

Give me a moment while I expound
on a principle our friend Newton found.
Every time you execute an action,
you cause an equal, opposite reaction.

In my way of thinking, this 'ol universe
works backward - kinda in reverse.
Everyone should do what I want them to,
but I find just the opposite is true.

When I instruct my kid, and say "do not".
He only hears "do".  The "not" he forgot.
That's not just the way it is with a kid,
adults, too, don't like anyone to forbid.

In my imagination, I can clearly see
just how I'd like everything to be.
For example, say, I want to get that date,
with my crush, but she won't cooperate. 

Then, when my interest starts to wane,
now, she begins a romantic campaign.
Her attraction for me starts to grow, 
equal to how much I hit the brakes to slow.

Based on Isaac Newton's bright ideology,
maybe I should use reverse psychology;
but that would drive me out of my head.
So, I'll let people be themselves instead.
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Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 2:55 PM
Another great one…you hit the apple on the head!! LOL
Crandall Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 7:06 PM
Haha, I think the apple hit me on the head!
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