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1/10/2025 for Laws of Physics and Humanity Poetry Contest sponsored by Di11y Da11y

Give me a moment while I expound on a principle our friend Newton found. Every time you execute an action, you cause an equal, opposite reaction. In my way of thinking, this 'ol universe works backward - kinda in reverse. Everyone should do what I want them to, but I find just the opposite is true. When I instruct my kid, and say "do not". He only hears "do". The "not" he forgot. That's not just the way it is with a kid, adults, too, don't like anyone to forbid. In my imagination, I can clearly see just how I'd like everything to be. For example, say, I want to get that date, with my crush, but she won't cooperate. Then, when my interest starts to wane, now, she begins a romantic campaign. Her attraction for me starts to grow, equal to how much I hit the brakes to slow. Based on Isaac Newton's bright ideology, maybe I should use reverse psychology; but that would drive me out of my head. So, I'll let people be themselves instead.

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Date: 1/10/2025 2:55:00 PM
Another great one…you hit the apple on the head!! LOL
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David Crandall
Date: 1/10/2025 7:06:00 PM
Haha, I think the apple hit me on the head!

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