Human the First

Once He  said with pride,
I'll send him he will and ride,

mud He with made,
kept them in His shade,
later on he said,
eat, this for thee is bad,
later,on earth He led,
for years they prayed,
my God! forgive they said,
forgave He and said,
on earth my name spread.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 11, 2010 at 2:33 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ahmad. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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