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Human Sandcastles

we build ourselves up into what we want to be... life's tide erodes us

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Ryan Jackson

Date: 8/3/2011 5:34:00 AM

One of the best short poems I have read, brilliant write jim, Ryan.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2011 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Jim. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Jim. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 8:43:00 PM

Congrats Jim on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share with us all with luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/10/2010 5:31:00 PM

The ever present ebbing tide of life~NICE MISTER!!!!!~Rick

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this great psychological approach..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jim in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:47:00 PM

VERY good message in this one. Congratulations, Jim!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:24:00 PM

Congrats Jim on your big win in Irmas' contest with this super entry .. enjoy your top spot tonight with luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 11:55:00 AM

congratulations Jim on the placement,

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations Jim on winning 3rd place-kashinath

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:10:00 AM

congratulations Jim on your 3ard place. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:09:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Jim

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 11:09:00 PM

love this Jim, so profound, Congrats. Harry

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:25:00 PM

Jim~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2010 8:49:00 AM

Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jim and wish you the best in the contest if you enter it. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 6:09:00 PM

wee! I love, it and good luck,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 3:44:00 PM

Nice write write on humanb sandcastles with nice images, Jim

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/2/2010 1:03:00 PM

This is a wonderuful Haiku, Jim. And if you're talking about superficial stuff, yes, life does erode..not the real stuff that you are made of. Your inner strength, your heart and soul, the love for your family, your children... still it's wise introspection! Love, Audrey

Audrey Castaneda

Date: 12/2/2010 11:23:00 AM

nice' audree