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Human Nature

We live like lost souls, Hateful, vengeful, and hurtful, Numb insentient (2017)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/1/2017 9:21:00 PM

Hi Corwin, a sad but often true commentary on the human condition. I enjoyed :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/2/2017 10:01:00 PM

Thank you for your very kind offer of a collaboration but I don't feel like I have the expertise to attempt it. I'm still new at writing poetry and I'm still trying on new styles and experimenting with finding my voice in my writes. Thank you for the offer though and for liking my work :)

Corwin Donovan
Date: 8/1/2017 11:19:00 PM

Its no big deal. If you ever feel like a collaboration I would feel honored. Love your poems and cant wait for more.

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/1/2017 9:40:00 PM

ohh I am so sorry Corwin! I know your name but I misspelled it accidentally, I'm usually good at catching my misspellings, I'll have to be more conscientious... and I will fix the spelling in my original reply. Again, my apologies and keep writing and reading others' poetry as much as possible. That's how I'm growing in my poetry :)

Corwin Donovan
Date: 8/1/2017 9:29:00 PM

It cannot hold a candle to you or other poets here. Im finding that being different turns to weird and might not be best. So, maybe no premium lol thank you for the comment. Btw its Corwin