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Human Imperfection

how many stab wounds

   until pacified with death

      such human error

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2021

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May 10, 2021 at 2:26 PM

Human nature being what it is Jenna, some get their kicks by prolonging the agony, before granting death, a very deep insightful look at hate and torment, not pretty but absolutely true, cheers David

May 11, 2021 at 9:49 AM

Yes, and isn't that shameful? To feel so much pain, physical or emotional, that one would wish to die. Thank you for reading me, David.

James Marshall Goff

May 9, 2021 at 10:28 PM

Bold, incisive & succinct, Jenna, well done!

May 10, 2021 at 4:50 AM

Thanks for your thoughts, James.

Victor Buhagiar

May 9, 2021 at 3:29 AM

This is like giving a punch where it hurts most. Why can't we find peace in this world. Blessings to you Jenna,

May 10, 2021 at 4:49 AM

It's a 'What's in it for me" world. Thanks, Victor.

May 8, 2021 at 9:41 AM

Too many stab wounds in the world today Jenna, your words speak the truth… Belle

May 10, 2021 at 4:49 AM

True, Thanks, Belle.

Regina Mcintosh

May 8, 2021 at 9:19 AM

Wow. Just wow. God bless you sweet friend. Love and prayers, Gina

May 10, 2021 at 4:49 AM

Thanks, Gina.

May 8, 2021 at 8:55 AM

Powerful statement Jenna, I don't think mankind will change his ways anytime soon, there will be many more stab wounds. Tom

May 10, 2021 at 4:48 AM

Thanks very much, Tom.

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