Huge

huge I am huge. Really, I am huge. I am really, really... huge 8-15-16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2016 12:42:00 PM

Love it!! repeating huge makes it huger than life!

Ironic Zink
Date: 10/8/2016 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! My initial idea was JUMBO, then I realized it had two syllables.

Janis Thompson

Date: 10/7/2016 8:14:00 PM

I got a laugh from this one. Good work.

Ironic Zink
Date: 10/7/2016 11:30:00 PM

Thanks Janice; huge compliment. !!

Darren White

Date: 10/7/2016 1:24:00 AM

That's one way to get rid of feelings of inferiority :)

Ironic Zink
Date: 10/7/2016 1:30:00 AM

You wanna know the funniest part... when I was writing I was intending to give people confidence and I was comparing huge to important. I didn't realize the obvious connect to the male anatomy until the previous two comments by females. True story! Thanks for commenting!

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/15/2016 10:24:00 PM

Time to go on a diet! :)

Ironic Zink
Date: 8/16/2016 1:12:00 AM

Nice! Funny how I was aiming towards the self confidence reinforcement of the impact we all have in general; regarding our lives. And was being quite serious but hey; I suppose it covers all areas... I could use a more nutritional diet... thanks for the comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2016 7:58:00 PM

Very clever ... such a descriptive lantern Zink sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Ironic Zink
Date: 8/16/2016 1:15:00 AM

Thank you Jan!