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Howling At the Moon

Touched with madness joy and sadness ups and downs smiles and frowns held against your will and even still the force inside still abides so howl at the moon crazy as a loon this I know unfortunately so and then comes the darkness the opposite of bliss who would have thought who would have dreamed that everything that happened before hadn't happened as it seemed

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Stuart Bone

Date: 6/11/2017 8:03:00 PM

I sent this poem to a guy whose username is moon and he said he was crazy. I left out the lines "this I know" to "the opposite of bliss" as I thought they weren't necessary. I left in "ups and downs" "smiles and frowns" even though I would prefer something else in there less obvious. The rest is really good. Thanks