Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

How You Made My Stars Hush

How you made my stars hush





How fortunate I have been,
having found a shining ray,
Through darkness unseen,
creep over my lifeless clay,

Waking me up of long sleep,
and flattened heart beats,
Touching soul to its deep,
and countering all deceits,

You've made my stars hush,
rainbow colours, twinkle in eyes,
Painted with your magical brush,
perfect hues in canvas of my sky !

Aurifying from ponderous to agile,
How have you doctored me to live with a smile!






Written March 8th, 2015
For contest "How you make the stars hush" by Justin Bordner

Awarded HM

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Robert Lindley March 17, 2015 at 10:11 PM Back again to see you have won with this fine write! Bravooooooooo!!! A7 Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 17, 2015 at 10:47 PM Thanks a lot Robert! Fortunate to hv ur visits! Appreciate!!

Sandra Haight March 14, 2015 at 2:20 PM Congratulations on your win, Dr. Upma. Beautifully done. Hugs, Sandra Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 17, 2015 at 10:45 PM Thanks a lot Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 14, 2015 at 6:51 AM the couplet is captivating ;)! kudos! :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 14, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thnx Olive //hugs//

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2015 at 2:00 PM Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 14, 2015 at 7:36 AM Thnx a lot Debbie// love ur visits//

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 8, 2015 at 9:17 AM Great Upma. GL in the contest. Love>>>rajat Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 10, 2015 at 11:24 PM Thnx Rajat!

Kelly Deschler March 8, 2015 at 1:39 AM Those who make us smile should always be held closest to our hearts... A lovely, expressive write, Dr. Upma. Good luck in Justin's contest! Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 10, 2015 at 11:24 PM Thnx for ur kind visit n words Kelly!

Njeri Hunjeri March 7, 2015 at 11:10 PM Beautiful. Fav line "creep over my lifeless clay," all the best in the contest. Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 10, 2015 at 11:23 PM Thnx a lot njeri !