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How You Made My Stars Hush

How you made my stars hush How fortunate I have been, having found a shining ray, Through darkness unseen, creep over my lifeless clay, Waking me up of long sleep, and flattened heart beats, Touching soul to its deep, and countering all deceits, You've made my stars hush, rainbow colours, twinkle in eyes, Painted with your magical brush, perfect hues in canvas of my sky ! Aurifying from ponderous to agile, How have you doctored me to live with a smile! Written March 8th, 2015 For contest "How you make the stars hush" by Justin Bordner Awarded HM

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Date: 3/17/2015 10:11:00 PM
Back again to see you have won with this fine write! Bravooooooooo!!! A7
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/17/2015 10:47:00 PM
Thanks a lot Robert! Fortunate to hv ur visits! Appreciate!!
Date: 3/14/2015 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Upma. Beautifully done. Hugs, Sandra
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/17/2015 10:45:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!
Date: 3/14/2015 6:51:00 AM
the couplet is captivating ;)! kudos! :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/14/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thnx Olive //hugs//
Date: 3/13/2015 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/14/2015 7:36:00 AM
Thnx a lot Debbie// love ur visits//
Date: 3/8/2015 9:17:00 AM
Great Upma. GL in the contest. Love>>>rajat
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/10/2015 11:24:00 PM
Thnx Rajat!
Date: 3/8/2015 1:39:00 AM
Those who make us smile should always be held closest to our hearts... A lovely, expressive write, Dr. Upma. Good luck in Justin's contest!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/10/2015 11:24:00 PM
Thnx for ur kind visit n words Kelly!
Date: 3/7/2015 11:10:00 PM
Beautiful. Fav line "creep over my lifeless clay," all the best in the contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/10/2015 11:23:00 PM
Thnx a lot njeri !

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