How Unwise

HOW UNWISE

 
How unwise a man seems 
When
Within a transient life 
A 
Permanent residence to
Build strives!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
   29 MAY 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sivey Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 6:05 AM
I loved the symbolism within this enlightening write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this lovely poem this morning! What a powerful message you bring to us all by the wonderment of your words here! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 6:10 AM
My dearest friend, Russell! How wonderful to receive your visit! Thank you for your gracious comment!
Kearley Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:51 AM
Wise words....
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 4:18 AM
Thank you Dan! Appreciating something is like being a co-creator!
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