how the sun rates

so high is the sky 
and so low is the water 
how can sun compete
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Slaughter Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:04 AM
I'd rather like to think it "cooperates". A very good haiku, Karen.
Croft Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:35 PM
Yes that is so true also!
Empress Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 11:05 PM
So true how can the sun compete! This is so evocative and beautiful! How in few words you delivered something deep! A fave for me!
Croft Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:12 AM
Thank you friend for reading and enjoying!
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