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how the sun rates

so high is the sky and so low is the water how can sun compete

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Date: 8/17/2024 10:04:00 AM
I'd rather like to think it "cooperates". A very good haiku, Karen.
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/17/2024 3:35:00 PM
Yes that is so true also!
Date: 8/16/2024 11:05:00 PM
So true how can the sun compete! This is so evocative and beautiful! How in few words you delivered something deep! A fave for me!
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/17/2024 4:12:00 AM
Thank you friend for reading and enjoying!

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