How Stars Appear

Made from hope and fists balled tight
the secret handshake of manhood and mistrust fell heavy,
It anchored his identity and moved him through the seas of poverty
And like how stars just appear,
He became fight, hostility, crime
No longer a casualty to life’s turbulence
but instead, a creation of his own bad decisions
Reprieve met him at the tip of the needle
And like how stars just appear,
He became recklessness, loss, detachment
His chipped shoulder and heartbeat made of hot stones
Melt his ambition and push me towards the shore
But I always come back
And like how stars just appear,
He became intrigue, passion, something more
I’m his safe haven made up of the moments he slept through,
Playing hide and seek with the parts of him that his track marks held hostage
He can see my hope while I watch his war
And every time he looks at me, I can see everything that’s beautiful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/20/2016 8:50:00 AM
This was very dark and deep and definitely intriguing. This poem had me wandering along an unfamiliar path counting shadows along the way. The title is what brought me in and I love how you used that thought in this poem. Really nicely done.
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Jenny Monteverdi
Date: 10/20/2016 1:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. I really appreciate everything you said
Date: 10/20/2016 7:13:00 AM
Wow. Poignant and beautiful.
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Jenny Monteverdi
Date: 10/20/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Luke
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