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Smokey was the smartest cat in the world and he wasn't just a cat, he was family. He wasn't afraid to assert himself when he thought it was needed and Dad was just being greedy about those fish. Dad had great fun telling his friends about the tug of war with the cat over the fish.

All cats love fish as we all know, But Smokey just loved it, It made quite a show. My dad went fishing most every week, And Smokey would wait, By the door for his treat. Dad always saved Smokey a nice big fish, But Smokey kept begging, To refill his dish. One day Dad asked him ,"How much can you eat?" And gave him another, Just for a treat. Soon it was gone and the cat was back, Begging and pleading, For the fish in Dad's sack. Time and again Dad gave him another, And finally asked Mom, "Has he got a brother?" "Am I feeding two cats? Where does he put it? I can't give him more, He'll make himself sick." So Daddy refused after five or six fish, And Smokey decided, To fill his own dish. While Dad was busy, quick as a flash, He snatched up a filet, And made a mad dash; But Daddy was quick as the cat it would seem, And grabbed back the fish, As the cat made a scream. Round and around each tugged at his end, Till at last that poor fish, In the middle was rend. The cat ran away with a piece in his mouth, To hide with his fish, Somewhere in the house. Dad had great fun retelling this tale, Of the great tug of war, With the cat and fish tail.

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Date: 4/7/2021 4:09:00 PM
Ahh!! Loved this story in poetic form. Yes, that cat probably was heading toward being sick for someone to have to clean up. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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Judy Ball
Date: 4/7/2021 5:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara. God Bless, JB
Date: 4/7/2021 3:23:00 PM
Sounds like an epic tug-of-war here. Great works such as 'Moby Dick,' 'The Old Man & the Sea,' and such, come to mind. Soon you and Smokey will get the 'Pulitzer Prize for Literature!' :) gw
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Judy Ball
Date: 4/7/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Gershon. You're very kind. God Bless,, JB
Date: 4/7/2021 2:14:00 PM
Judy, Smokey sounds like he was quite a cat. " Time and again Dad gave him another, And finally asked Mom, "Has he got a brother?" Loved this verse. John
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Judy Ball
Date: 4/7/2021 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much J. God Bless, JB
Date: 4/7/2021 12:06:00 PM
what a treat you have served to us Judy:-) this is such fun:-) hugs Jan xx
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Judy Ball
Date: 4/7/2021 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. Smokey was a fun friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 4/7/2021 11:33:00 AM
Hello Judy ball, I lve this poem. It made me smile. yes all cats do like fish. For dinner and as a treat. enjoy your day my friend Blessings. Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/8/2021 10:25:00 AM
Hello Judy, yes I enjoyed it. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Judy Ball
Date: 4/7/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene. Glad you enjoyed it. God Bless, JB

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