Jacob Osae Poet Rhyme

How Ideal Is He

Hey girl, is he everything you wanted in a man.
Hey girl, is he perfection iterated in a plan,
You said I do not stand a chance,
To win your love - now or in advance

Funny thing about that is...
You do not even realize you fit this..
All this while I thought it was our name
That love has adorned in fame..

But now am so much sick about him
Can not believe he even called Tim
So tell me is this fair...
What's so ideal about him anywhere...

All I will say now is that, time will tell
If all that you feel is just a spell,
Your eyes will be unveiled to see,
And realize how ideal is he..

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Beata Agustin July 9, 2024 at 7:52 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.