How I Feel When I'M With You!!!!

Baby Girl When your touching me
 you make my world feel so complete. 
You know exactly what to do
 so I won't stop loving you. 

 When I see your smiling face
 my whole world disintegrates. 
Now I know just who I am,
 where I'm going, where I've been.

All I have is just one wish...
To hold you close and never forget
what we have and what we shared.
Why the hell was I so scared?

To make you my wife, to give you my ring,
To hold you in my arms once more.

May I ask you one question
Will you say ok
Will you be my wife Karly Raye?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 15, 2009 at 10:50 PM
I agree, you have a great talent for writing. I welcome you to poetry soup and I invite you to read some of my work. You display great capabilities in free verse form. I hope you enjoy your stay and I look forward to reading more of your work. Karly Raye must be special because you've poured your heart in this poem. This was a great Valentine's gift to her, great work...Raul
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February 15, 2009 at 9:42 PM
Matt, I think you have a talent for writing. You're poem is very sweet, I hope you keep writing. I look forward to seeing more of your work. - Karly
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February 13, 2009 at 11:23 PM
Matthew - you have a sensitive soul! Karly Raye is a lucky girl. Happy Valentine's Day - Carolyn
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