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Baby Girl When your touching me you make my world feel so complete. You know exactly what to do so I won't stop loving you. When I see your smiling face my whole world disintegrates. Now I know just who I am, where I'm going, where I've been. All I have is just one wish... To hold you close and never forget what we have and what we shared. Why the hell was I so scared? To make you my wife, to give you my ring, To hold you in my arms once more. May I ask you one question Will you say ok Will you be my wife Karly Raye?

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Date: 2/15/2009 10:50:00 PM
I agree, you have a great talent for writing. I welcome you to poetry soup and I invite you to read some of my work. You display great capabilities in free verse form. I hope you enjoy your stay and I look forward to reading more of your work. Karly Raye must be special because you've poured your heart in this poem. This was a great Valentine's gift to her, great work...Raul
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:42:00 PM
Matt, I think you have a talent for writing. You're poem is very sweet, I hope you keep writing. I look forward to seeing more of your work. - Karly
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:23:00 PM
Matthew - you have a sensitive soul! Karly Raye is a lucky girl. Happy Valentine's Day - Carolyn
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