How I Feel

when you talk to everyone and it seem to be nothing to say
then you remember haven rejected you and hell condemned your soul to pay
then you look at your mother to cry out to 
but she's screaming that same pain that bun deep within you
sister what a smile
but in the night which confined her to exile
what is their to be won when you have lost your heart
then you ignore the pain that hurt you at start
when you pray for death and all hope is gone
you sit and regret the day you was born
me oh me i cry miss love 
i sat i watched you die miss love
in the grave i saw you white as a dove miss love
when you go into the world thinking everything is OK
you provide in a home were your heart thinks it needs to stay
i am nothing like a school play this is how i feel
in the world you'll find everything i say is real
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Awesome peice. I really love this. Chulo, the light still shines, even when it cant be seen. And someone will accept you, even if they arent close to you. Heaven rejects none, and hell, just trys to trick your soul. cry, but be strong. xoxo .:Rain:.
Bungay Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 5:49 AM
very good peice of writing, email me
Baez Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 4:57 AM
Thank you for comment kevin, i wouldn't say great just ur average joe putting thoughts on paper, love the last two lines of this poem. Keep up the good work.
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