How Great the Cost

A lonely person hides to cry
An ancient person wants to die;
Within the shadows of the mind
A thought unused is left behind.

We walk the path that goes nowhere
Where silence is the friend we share;
Where friendship lives in solitude
And loneliness is thought imbued.

A single candle shares its light
With stars that pierce the shades of night;
We wait alone till we are gone
While fleeting years still hurry on.

We keep the rhythm, read the rhyme
We lose the step and pass the time;
We move with fate to reach the end
And still we never comprehend.

We lost the dream, we lost the light
We spend our years tossed in fright;
Till wisdom found how great the cost
With nothing gained when all was lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lwele Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 8:52 AM
PERFECT
Situation Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Simply a classic. Love John
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 8:29 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, excellent rythm, beautiful imagery.
Bordner Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 11:47 PM
This composition motivates me to cultivate wisdom with urgent alacrity - in the sadness and solitude there remains the hope,that fertile light that leads - beautiful contrasts in concepts - J.A.B.
O'Leary Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Very deep... I'll be rereading later! Terry
Brown Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:02 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Elizabeth. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
Song Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 11:29 PM
Hi Elizabeth...This poem moves me deeply..re-reading it again and again...It says sooo much. Life is precious and short and we all need to share our light! Thanks for stopping by my latest this week...u are so supportive...Hey, isn't it great to see Jon Aaron on here again...He's been away for a while..Hope this note finds u doing well also! Love, Gwendolen
Green Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 9:21 AM
so captivating,,,so delightful,,,so very well written,,,you always trill and are amazing,,,lizzie........
Nair Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Very very enchanting rhyme with a touching message..:) Jag
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Well sustained 8888 meter and couplet rhyming... melancholy and deeply moving. In the final analysis we are all alone... Keith
Song Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:16 PM
Having the same issues as you described with posting this evening, Lizzie...bizarre...let's blame it on more of those solar flares! :) How many times have a squandered God's gift of time to do something useful/meaningful with my life! Hit home hard! Great theme to share with now over 300 poets! Wow!
Song Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:15 PM
Having the same issues as you described with posting this evening, Lizzie...bizarre...let's blame it on more of those solar flares! :) How many times have a squandered God's gift of time to do something useful/meaningful with my life! Hit home hard! Great theme to share with now over 300 poets! Wow!
Freeman Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 3:30 PM
In total agreement with Nathan on this one, Elizabeth. All the way through. Agape, Moses
D. Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 10:50 AM
strong, and beautiful
Mac Donald Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 5:01 AM
This is so beautifully rich, Elizabeth! When one verse seems to crest, the next follows through, equally as compelling.:) This is mind boggling. Best wishes, Mikki
Breidenthal Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 4:58 PM
This poem is too good. Love your thoughts here. (: Always, Laura
Onclaud Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 10:56 AM
lizzie dear.. another soulful read , a spiritual plea that stirs the heart... beautifully, skillfully crafted…you shine for me..:) huggs!
Martin Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Liz, this hits home like a bolt of lighning! Nice write and thanks for your comments earlier. I'm traveling home this week - quite busy but will stop back in (here) after I'm stateside. Once again - LOVELY poem that speaks to the heart of time passing...I so envy your talent. God bless, Terry
Effendi Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 11:09 PM
Salutations, Grand Master Poet. Reading you is always an inspiration, madame.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:04 PM
A wonderful poem to contemplate Lizzie. Thank you for your comments on my poems. I haven't been around much because of watching my g.daughter. I try to keep up, but an infant sure consumes a lot of time. Please check your Soup Mail. Hugs, Lotus
Johnson Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 3:49 PM
Just why do we live here on earth? We ask this question from our birth. It's not much fun when we're alone. Just waiting and hoping without a phone. Where friendship lives in solitude is a great line. You have many in this poem. Thanks for being my friend.
K. Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Ah-- very valuable thoughts you give here-- yes, how sad indeed when that happens, when we find out that things have held us back-- sometimes we just have to take those chances I guess--This is a very good reminder for me, Elizabeth! Thanks for sharing about you & caterwauling, somehow I can't imagine you doing that ;) I hope you're having a great week, hugs to you! :D & thanks for passing by my poems, it means a lot!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Excellent rhythm, rhyme and content... your phrasing is exquisite, perfectly in keeping with your theme. Well done, Lizzie! Best wishes, Keith
Agtani Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 7:46 PM
When we passed away in this world nothing is gained, I agree. I have enjoyed reading your rhyming poem tonight. Your poems Elizabeth are outstanding. Thank you for your kind comments at my work. Love dalila
A   Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 7:21 PM
Hi, back here again, Liz! Can I tell you how wonderful I know you ARE. I never pick up bad vibes from you. I'm glad the poetry soup comes with beautiful souls like yours. I wish we could all learn from you. You truly are the most wonderful poet on this site..lol~Next to Linda-Marie..(but she left SORT OF) :-( well anyways.. I have never met a poet who gave so much honest time of support. Your comments are always uplifting and thoughtful. Not even if you don't understand our poetry you are here to support us with an open heart and mind of kindness. You and another poet name Mia, are wonderful women on the soup. You treat us all the same. No matter or differences or misunderstanding, I'm sure many of us wish we could wear your shoes of comfort. always! PD
A   Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 7:23 PM
typo,,on our differences
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