How Fast

how fast can it drain
fall
drip
pour
how much will it continue
how much can you lose till it ends
over
gone 
left
will you fell the pain
cutting isn't easy
it hurts
they say takes the pain away
but how fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 2, 2008 at 1:33 PM
Oh gee, poor thing, hope this is not what I think. Remember, we need the rain as much as the sun, in our lives we all at times feel pain, so we appreciate the joy so much more. Everything for a reason, time will show you. Hang in there for a brighter tomorrow. It will come. Love, Shar
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