Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

How Do You Feel

 Love portrays the myriad of displays, 
Much may pass, the way you feel - stays! 

Crazy love song with dancing butterflies, 
Cryptical sighs and puppy eyes. 

Sweet whispered nothings making perfect sense 
Foaming cloud nine, puff and intense.   

Fond pillow talks of matters of sublime,
Earnest vows till the end of time. 

Walks either holding hands or arm in arm 
Have a mystique of all time charm. 
 
Would there be a prerequisite of love 
If not for increments above?! 

Love portrays a myriad of displays, 
Much may pass, the way you feel - stays! 

January 23, 2023

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Beata Agustin January 24, 2023 at 11:31 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Margarita Lillico January 25, 2023 at 1:57 PM Thank you!

Christuraj Alex January 24, 2023 at 7:29 PM "myriad of displays", "Cryptical sighs and puppy eyes", and "fond pillow talks" - String symbols and images are brought in to express intense feelings. Congratulations! Margarita Lillico January 25, 2023 at 1:58 PM Thank you!

Susan Ashley January 24, 2023 at 5:54 PM Dear Margarita, your romantic poem is so tender and expressive. I especially enjoyed; "Sweet whispered nothings making perfect sense" - indeed, that is the language of love. Congratulations for your excellent win in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Margarita Lillico January 25, 2023 at 1:58 PM Thank you Susan!

Mystic Rose Rose January 24, 2023 at 11:04 AM How do you feel I dared ask? You unloosed your soul and gave me just that. I felt the power of your answer, dear poet/poetess. Thank you for joining my contest, congrats and God bless ! Margarita Lillico January 25, 2023 at 1:59 PM Thank you for an excellent theme!

Beryl Edmonds January 22, 2023 at 5:28 PM A beautiful, sentimental poem Margarita, just as love makes one feel… Belle Margarita Lillico January 25, 2023 at 2:00 PM Thank you Belle!

William Chapman January 22, 2023 at 1:52 PM nice and kind. Margarita Lillico January 25, 2023 at 2:00 PM Thank you William.