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Love portrays the myriad of displays, Much may pass, the way you feel - stays! Crazy love song with dancing butterflies, Cryptical sighs and puppy eyes. Sweet whispered nothings making perfect sense Foaming cloud nine, puff and intense. Fond pillow talks of matters of sublime, Earnest vows till the end of time. Walks either holding hands or arm in arm Have a mystique of all time charm. Would there be a prerequisite of love If not for increments above?! Love portrays a myriad of displays, Much may pass, the way you feel - stays! January 23, 2023

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Date: 1/24/2023 11:31:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2023 1:57:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/24/2023 7:29:00 PM
"myriad of displays", "Cryptical sighs and puppy eyes", and "fond pillow talks" - String symbols and images are brought in to express intense feelings. Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2023 1:58:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/24/2023 5:54:00 PM
Dear Margarita, your romantic poem is so tender and expressive. I especially enjoyed; "Sweet whispered nothings making perfect sense" - indeed, that is the language of love. Congratulations for your excellent win in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2023 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 1/24/2023 11:04:00 AM
How do you feel I dared ask? You unloosed your soul and gave me just that. I felt the power of your answer, dear poet/poetess. Thank you for joining my contest, congrats and God bless !
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2023 1:59:00 PM
Thank you for an excellent theme!
Date: 1/22/2023 5:28:00 PM
A beautiful, sentimental poem Margarita, just as love makes one feel… Belle
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2023 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Belle!
Date: 1/22/2023 1:52:00 PM
nice and kind.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/25/2023 2:00:00 PM
Thank you William.

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